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Samira Wyld's avatar

This is profoundly beautiful 🖤

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Stephanie M. Vargo's avatar

!Very thought provoking. Thank you

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Elisa Affanato's avatar

Just an enchanting read, jybyky

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Maria Scott Writes's avatar

Exquisite!

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Gaby Brogan's avatar

Stunning. My favourite line was "How the cracks of empty space are illuminated by charm

Until the ocean shivers, rejecting every word."

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Elham Sarikhani's avatar

We walk this road together, knowing the sun, the dusk, the moon, and the stars will one day fade from our sight.

We know the stones underfoot, the laughter that hides loneliness, the curses that test the skin of the heart.

And still, we leave our mark, not for praise, but to say we were here, that we saw and were seen.

When the moment of separation comes, we will have already spoken the truth: we belonged to each other in the brief eternity we shared.

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❤️ 🙏

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This feels like watching the sun set in slow motion—beautiful, aching, and honest.

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Thanks for the comments. Really appreciate it. The sun will set without being asked, without being told, it cannot be postponed, and will proceed according to a rhythm that has been determined naturally.

Saima Durrani's avatar

I can feel the deep hurt and kindness beneath the words. Life is tough for all of us, and healing begins the moment we choose to keep moving forward. Wishing you good luck and strength for the future.

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Lisa Marie Lawler's avatar

Such beautiful writing 💙

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Sue Reid's avatar

Love this. Thank you 💕

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Lia's avatar

This is so exquisitely beautiful and emotional,it brought me to tears.Thank you for the offer of your feelings, for these gems of words that stir the heart and soul.✨❤️

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The balance of humility and emotional richness, written with sincerity and without expectation of return. Like a love letter, not just to people, but to the moments, lessons, and presence they bring...It flows between the real and the emotional, tracing the soul’s most fragile paths.

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Shifra Clara Wasserstein's avatar

My goodness 💗 I am deeply grateful for you sharing your heart with us.

It feels exquisite! and it pains my heart that we live in a society where such heartfelt words that are pure as white pearls and light up my heart like the glistening of diamonds 💎 should ever be considered by anyone- anything less than beautiful beyond measure.

How can a soul of a poet like you be allowed to carry the burden of a lie to think for a moment of oneself as a “failed” writer. It’s heartbreaking to read the words in your bio: that everything you write is wrong & bad 💔 after reading an incredible piece like this!!!

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Paulette Bodeman's avatar

Your words a like watercolors on the canvas of our lives. And like a painting, I lean in close, then step away to take it all in and find the meaning that is for me to discover.

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Liliane Briarwyn's avatar

Your words carry a whisper of eternity, a journey through time and space that feels both deeply personal and universal. There’s a quiet stillness in the way you paint moments, the sun, the moon, the stars, and in the way you walk, barefoot, through life’s difficulties and joys. Your words hold a serene truth, as if each one is a small fragment of light, illuminating the darkness in us all.

There is a delicate balance in your poem between absence and presence, a kind of longing that transforms into quiet acceptance. You remind me that we are all part of this journey, together, even in our separateness. It’s beautiful, and your sincerity makes it all the more powerful.

Thank you for sharing such depth, such vulnerability.

Your words are like the sunrise, the dusk, and the stars, holding space in this world and my heart.

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Rea de Miranda's avatar

This is beautifully written, Jybyky. One day everything will cease to exist and completely forgotten.

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