This poem appears to be in my opinion, an abstract meditation on truth, identity, and the human condition.
Removing color asks us to see differently, stripping away all pretense and judgment... What’s left is either clarity or emptiness depending on how we choose to perceive...
Your piece left me quietly stirred like standing at the edge of a still lake, unsure if I’m looking at water or a mirror... The way you speak of color.... Not just as something to see!!!
but instead as something to feel or question!!! It really unsettles the way I usually categorize meaning...
I felt a kind of grieving in your words not for the loss of color itself, but for the layers of identity and humanity we’ve painted over truth.
I hear in your writing a deep longing for simplicity, for purity and for something untouched by pride, violence, or performance. It’s as if you’re asking this deep and powerful question
what remains when all symbols are stripped away?!!!
What is real when even our very inner truths and perceptions are stained by ego?!!
And yet, even in this colorless contemplation, you paint something incredibly and amazingly vivid!! It is a warning... it is a hope....It is a lament!!
You remind us that perhaps the most honest state is one where we stop trying to name everything, to own everything!!
Instead simply return to being quietly humble like nature!! Like the essence we have all forgotten.
Thank you for reading and understanding this writing carefully. Really appreciate your very complete review, from various sides by explaining the truth, when the existence of this planet earth with various nuances that sometimes do not match the wishes of natural ethics. Have a beautiful day.
It really resonated with me!! I cant stop mulling it over in my mind!! Thanks for writing something so awesome!! I cant remember the last time I felt so connected to a peice!! You did a wonderful job
Even a ‘not’ color is a color of importance… as a symbol of the crazy world we live in. Well done!
Thank you for your review and time, have a wonderful day.
This poem appears to be in my opinion, an abstract meditation on truth, identity, and the human condition.
Removing color asks us to see differently, stripping away all pretense and judgment... What’s left is either clarity or emptiness depending on how we choose to perceive...
Your piece left me quietly stirred like standing at the edge of a still lake, unsure if I’m looking at water or a mirror... The way you speak of color.... Not just as something to see!!!
but instead as something to feel or question!!! It really unsettles the way I usually categorize meaning...
I felt a kind of grieving in your words not for the loss of color itself, but for the layers of identity and humanity we’ve painted over truth.
I hear in your writing a deep longing for simplicity, for purity and for something untouched by pride, violence, or performance. It’s as if you’re asking this deep and powerful question
what remains when all symbols are stripped away?!!!
What is real when even our very inner truths and perceptions are stained by ego?!!
And yet, even in this colorless contemplation, you paint something incredibly and amazingly vivid!! It is a warning... it is a hope....It is a lament!!
You remind us that perhaps the most honest state is one where we stop trying to name everything, to own everything!!
Instead simply return to being quietly humble like nature!! Like the essence we have all forgotten.
Thank you for reading and understanding this writing carefully. Really appreciate your very complete review, from various sides by explaining the truth, when the existence of this planet earth with various nuances that sometimes do not match the wishes of natural ethics. Have a beautiful day.
It really resonated with me!! I cant stop mulling it over in my mind!! Thanks for writing something so awesome!! I cant remember the last time I felt so connected to a peice!! You did a wonderful job
Thank you for enjoying, and hopefully this simple writing is useful, an appreciation for you for liking it.
Your so humble!! It truly floors me! I would never refer to this amazing peice as simple!! But you truly are a humble person!!
Thank you for the praise, if there is extraordinary meaning, then it will be a presentation for you and all of us to enjoy.
The 2nd to last paragraph… "Needless to say…" sealed the deal for me.
Thank you for taking the time to read this, and your appreciation is greatly appreciated. Have a wonderful day.
Thank you for this 🙏
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